Stage Nine: Reward

You know that feeling when you finally finish something nearly impossible? When, at long last, you’ve completed a task that took forever or you’ve made it through something you were dreading? Of course you do. If you didn’t, I’d worry that you never left your couch. The real question is, what do you do afterward?

A Job Well Done Is Its Own Reward, but a Good Party Never Hurts

I can think of loads of examples myself, but the biggest one that comes to mind is FABA. That’s the Fine Arts Banquet and Auction held by the school where I taught for 11 years.  It is by far the biggest, most in-depth event of the year (think full-scale dinner theater, live music, big silent auction, and formal atmosphere, all run by a small Christian school). My (self-appointed) job was to write a full-length play during the summer and then help direct the play during the school year. Needless to say, it was a lot of work.

But like many things that are hard work, the payoff was amazing. The cast and crew always did a phenomenal job, and the audience adored the performances. Granted, it helped that half of the audience was made up of the students’ families, but still. Afterward, in celebration, I would usually sleep the peaceful slumber of someone who is floating weightless in a sea of carefree bliss.  And then we would have a cast party: food, awards, and hanging out. Last year we even celebrated by buzzing my husband’s hair into a mohawk. Now THAT was rewarding.

Rewards for the Hero

Stage nine of the Hero’s Journey is that of Reward. In the last stage, the hero faced his or her greatest fear in hopes of gaining this reward. The hero may even have died and returned, either literally or figuratively. But now the Ordeal is over, and it’s time to celebrate!

Christopher Vogler discusses several common types of Reward scenes, including a campfire where the spoils of battle are enjoyed or a love scene where the hero finally wins the lady’s heart. No matter what the Reward scene looks like, the important part is that the hero finally gains what he or she set out to find. “Treasure hunters take the gold, spies snatch the secret, pirates plunder the captured ship…. A transaction has been made—the hero has risked death or sacrificed life, and now gets something in exchange.” [184] The Reward could be pretty much anything that the hero needed in order to save himself, someone he loves, or maybe even the world, and now he has taken it.

Older and Wiser

Think back to your own Ordeal and Reward that you remembered at the beginning of this post. I’m sure you celebrated your victory with vigor and gusto at first. But when you reflected on it later, how had the ordeal changed you? For me, each play developed me as a writer and a thinker. My later plays tended to have more meaning and symbolism than some of the earlier ones. The process of directing also matured me as a person. As in, I think it took years off my life and gave me gray hairs that I will undoubtedly find if I ever stop getting highlights. And you know what? That’s ok. Those were years well-invested, not wasted. Also, that’s why God created hairstylists.

For the hero in an adventure, the Reward can come along with many other kinds of changes, Vogler says. For example, the hero experiences initiation into an elite group of survivors. She gains new perceptions or knowledge through the Ordeal. She may be able to see through deceptions that had duped her earlier, or she may experience self-realization and epiphany, seeing inside and around her like never before.

Example from The Hobbit

After surviving the Battle of Five Armies, Bilbo Baggins is a changed man too. Well, a changed Hobbit, anyway. He is well deserving of his reward, but he doubts that Thorin will have forgiven him for stealing the coveted Arkenstone and giving it to the “enemy” in hopes of keeping peace. However, Thorin has been mortally wounded in the fight, so his last conversation with Bilbo is one of forgiveness and blessing. Thorin passed through the Ordeal and was changed, too, but he did not experience the resurrection of a hero.

Thorin’s death finally frees everyone to share the treasure as it should have been in the first place. Everyone gets a portion, even Bilbo. After the experiences he’s just been through, though, he hardly wants any treasure. For one thing, how is he supposed to carry it all back to the Shire? Because, of course, that’s what he’s been longing for all along. He takes two small chest of gold and silver and starts off on his long road home.

Today’s Question: Think again of the Ordeal that you faced. How did you celebrate your Reward in the end? And (for bonus points) how did it change you?

Source: Vogler, Christopher. The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, Second Edition. Studio City: Michael Wiese Productions, 1998.

Stage Eight: The Ordeal

“The simple secret of the ordeal is this: Heroes must die so they can be reborn.” (159) This is a familiar theme in adventure stories, but when it’s done well, that makes it more powerful rather than less. I have a theory about why this is the case, but I’ll make you wait until the end of this post to find out what it is. (Hey! No skipping ahead.)

Defining the Ordeal

Last week we watched as our hero approached the Inmost Cave—the place of the most dangerous faceoff thus far. Now we see the hero facing what Christopher Vogler calls The Ordeal. He defines the Ordeal as “the moment the hero faces his greatest fear. For most people this is death, but in many stories it’s just whatever the hero is most afraid of.…” (175) It could be Indiana Jones being locked in a tomb with venomous asps, Luke Skywalker discovering his own face inside Darth Vader’s helmet, or Winston Smith facing torture by rats in 1984.

This is no small task; in fact, the Ordeal often does bring death, at least in some form. The hero doesn’t literally have to die at this stage in the story. He or she may appear to die, may witness someone else’s death, or may cause someone else’s death. The death may even be even emotional or symbolic. The point is that the Ordeal will be costly, and the audience needs to see that.

Crisis vs. Climax

So what, exactly, is this Ordeal? One clarification that Vogler points out is that “[the Ordeal] should not be confused with the climax of the Hero’s Journey…. Let’s call it the crisis to differentiate it from the climax, (the big moment of Act Three and the crowning event of the whole story).” (160-161) In other words, the crisis and the climax aren’t necessarily the same thing.

If that just threw you for a loop, then don’t feel bad; I’m right there with you. I think there are many stories that do combine the crisis and the climax, but Vogler is simply depicting one common version of the adventure storyline. He is also quick to remind writers and readers alike that the steps of the Hero’s Journey are not immovable laws but flexible guidelines. If you want to tell a story that combines the hero’s death and resurrection with the climax of Act 3, then go for it!

Example from The Hobbit

For example, in The Hobbit, I feel like the crisis and the climax do coincide. Tolkien doesn’t make a big deal about the slaying of Smaug (unlike Peter Jackson’s movie). Instead, he focuses our attention on Bilbo’s plight and the Battle of Five Armies for the treasure under the mountain. During this climactic battle, Bilbo puts on his ring of invisibility but is knocked unconscious. The battle ensues, and tragic losses are sustained on all sides. When it’s finally over, no one can find Bilbo. They have almost given him up as lost when Bilbo wakes up and calls out to a man who was sent to look for him. Bilbo, the burglar-hero, is alive again!

Why Death and Resurrection?

So why is it important for the hero to experience death, whether her own or someone else’s? There are many reasons, but I’ll mention two: first, death and resurrection change the hero. “Heroes don’t just visit death and come home. They return changed, transformed.” (160) Most heroes are flawed at the beginning of the adventure. Maybe they’re slowed down by fear, tainted by bitterness, or shackled with selfishness. They may battle these flaws throughout the story, but sometimes flaws can be eliminated only in death. An author may choose to purify his hero in this way, resurrecting her to a future and a heart that have been refined by fire.

The second reason it’s important for the hero to experience death is that death and resurrection resonate with every audience.

Consider, for example, Gandalf, the Blue Ranger, and Jesus. That may seem like a scandalous or sacrilegious list, but hear me out.

In The Fellowship of the Rings, we watch Gandalf plummet to his death, the whip of a Balrog wrapped around his ankle. In the new Power Rangers movie, the Blue Ranger is killed by the villainess, Rita Repulsa. (I do realize the name is corny and the movie is meh. I’m just going for variety of example.) But, as you probably know, these heroes are resurrected later on in the story, to the shock and delight of characters and audience alike. I’m sure you can think of countless more stories with a death/resurrection sequence, so my question is this: why is it so common and yet so powerful?

My answer is Jesus. Consider this story: in Act 1, a Child is born to a virgin mother, grows up to do miracles, and is loved by some and hated by many. In Act 2, differing opinions about His deity reach a crescendo, and He is nailed to a Roman cross to die as a heretic. But in Act 3—oh, in Act 3—Jesus steps out of His tomb, not with a little extension added to His finite years of life but as the embodiment of eternal life itself. And, as is true in all good adventures, this victory is not His alone but ours as well. He has willingly gone through death and has come out the other side, opening the door and leading us through our greatest fear and into glory. Hallelujah!

Tolkien’s Eucatastrophe

Now, I plan to write a post about Tolkien’s On Fairy Stories all by itself in the near future, but for the moment, let me simply reference his idea of eucatastrophe. He coined this word to mean a “good catastrophe, a sudden joyous ‘turn’” of events. (22)

He observes that “the Birth of Christ is the eucatastrophe of Man’s history. The Resurrection is the eucatastrophe of the story of the Incarnation. This story begins and ends in joy….There is no tale ever told that men would rather find was true, and none which so many skeptical men have accepted as true on its own merits.” (23)

This, as I mentioned at the beginning of the post, is why the theme of death and resurrection is so common and yet so moving. Eucatastrophe has been etched on our hearts since Adam and Eve, and all stories that contain it are pointers and tributes to THE Death and Resurrection story.

Conclusion

There is MUCH more I could have said about this stage of the Hero’s Journey. In fact, I probably should have made this a two-part article, but I didn’t want to test your patience. If you do want more information about the “elasticity of emotion,” the hero fighting his own shadow, the hero “cheating death” with the help of Allies, or even the supposed psychological side of this stage, feel free to read The Writer’s Journey. It will be time well spent, I assure you.

Regardless, I think the best takeaway from the Ordeal stage is the link between our desire for stories with resurrection and the Gospel, or Evangelium, itself. We all long for a happy ending not just in stories but in reality, and because of the Gospel, we can have it. As Tolkien says, “The Evangelium has not abrogated legends; it has hallowed them, especially the ‘happy ending.’” (24)

Today’s Question: Can you think of an example of a powerful death and resurrection Ordeal in a story you know?

Sources:
Vogler, Christopher. The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, Second Edition. Studio City: Michael Wiese Productions, 1998.
Tolkien, J.R.R. On Fairy Stories.  http://brainstorm-services.com/wcu-2004/fairystories-tolkien.pdf

A Claim That Demands a Response

“…The whole story of the world—and of how we fit into it—is most clearly understood through a careful, direct look at the story of Jesus.” [1]

No matter who you are or what beliefs you hold, you must feel that this is a bold statement. To some, it seems too brash, too narrow, too conveniently Christocentric. To others, it is a bedrock truth, although it may have become so through a long and difficult struggle. But to skeptics and believers alike, this statement is bold and sweeping, leaving no room for exception or addendum. Life—my life and your life—makes the most sense when we view it in light of Jesus’ life.

This is the premise of Timothy Keller’s book, King’s Cross. If I’d started with the title of the book, you may have thought it was about the London railway system. And as interesting as that book would be (so long as it included Platform 9 ¾), it probably wouldn’t have been penned by Tim Keller, a Presbyterian pastor in Manhattan. Instead, King’s Cross is about those two words as they relate to the life and death of Jesus in the Gospel of Mark. “Mark’s account of Jesus’ life is presented to us in two symmetrical acts: his identity as King over all things…, and his purpose in dying on the cross….” [2]

The King and the cross. These two facets of Jesus’ life are not peripheral, nor can you be neutral about them. The Gospels describe Jesus as King—not just King of the Jews but King of Kings and Lord of Lords. If this is true, then this King would deserve your allegiance and your obedience. The Gospels also describe Jesus’ cross—not an unfortunate end to a benevolent life but the foreordained, willing slaughter of God Himself. But even more importantly, the cross is shown to be not the end but the beginning. The Gospels show Christ resurrected in power, returning to bring hope and healing both then and now.

If this is true, then this cross has the power to change your life forever.

So what are we supposed to do with these claims from the book of Mark? How do the King and the cross relate to you and me? Keller answers this way: “Mark wants us to see that the coming of Jesus calls for decisive action. Jesus is seen as a man of action, moving quickly and decisively from even to event. There is relatively little of Jesus’ teaching in the Gospel of Mark—mainly, we see Jesus doing. Therefore we can’t remain neutral; we need to respond actively.” [3] What are we supposed to do with the King and the cross? In a word: respond.

In his book Mere Christianity, C.S. Lewis explains the three possible responses to Christ: condemn Him as a liar, pity Him as a lunatic, or worship Him as Lord. In his short but excellent essay, “What Are We to Make of Jesus Christ,” he expands on this same idea, saying, “We may note in passing that [Jesus] was never regarded as a mere moral teacher. He did not produce that effect on any of the people who actually met him. He produced mainly three effects—Hatred—Terror—Adoration. There was no trace of people expressing mild approval.” [4]

To see the life of Jesus accurately is to realize that you must respond. You cannot stay neutral; He did not intend for that to be an option. You may reject Him. You may fear Him. But for those who have been given the grace and boldness to respond in worship, the King and the cross will transform this life and the next. When we begin to experience that, we will see how beautifully his life makes sense of ours.” [5]

Sources:
[1] Timothy Keller, King’s Cross (New York: Penguin Group, 2011), x.
[2] Ibid. xiv
[3] Ibid. xiv
[4] C.S. Lewis, “What Are We to Make of Jesus Christ” from God in the Dock  http://www.christasus.com/letters/cslwhatarewetomakeofjesuschrist.htm
[5] Timothy Keller, King’s Cross (New York: Penguin Group, 2011), x.

Stage Seven: Approach to the Inmost Cave

Woo-hoo! We’re past the halfway mark! I didn’t tell you when we were AT the halfway mark because that’s always a little disheartening, at least in workouts. (You mean I get to do the same amount of work that just nearly killed me, but with way less energy? Oh, goody.) So you, my friends, are MORE than halfway done with the Hero’s Journey! Don’t poop out now!

Last week we saw how the hero began to encounter Tests, Allies, and Enemies. But despite the risk of these encounters, the hero has not yet reached the ultimate test. No, this ultimate test still lies ahead, and to reach it, the hero must undergo the Approach to the Inmost Cave.

Setbacks while Approaching the Cave

If the Tests of the previous stage were difficult for the hero, the Approach should be even harder. Christopher Vogler explains that “heroes may have disheartening setbacks at this stage while approaching the supreme goal. Such reversals of fortune are called dramatic complications.” (152) Perhaps the hero’s secret weapon turns out to be ineffective. Maybe the team realizes they’ve gotten bad information. In the character department, it’s possible that the allies are afraid to step it up from “supportive friend” to “mighty warrior” status. The hero may even end up completely abandoned. “Though [these setbacks] may seem to tear us apart,” Vogler says, “they are only a further test of our willingness to proceed. They also allow us to put ourselves back together in a more effective form for traveling in this unfamiliar terrain.” (152)

If the Inmost Cave is where the greatest battle of the adventure takes place—whether physically or otherwise—then the approach to this Cave is a vital time of preparation. The hero has much to learn, acquire, decide, and prepare. Let’s consider a few examples.

Examples of Approaching the Cave

In Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back, Luke Skywalker has been training with Master Yoda by running around a swamp and levitating rocks. He starts to feel pretty cocky about his new skillz, so he foolishly disregards Yoda’s counsel in order to “save” his friends. However, the impetuous little twerp steps right into Darth Vader’s trap. As he flies to Cloud City, he is approaching the Inmost Cave.

In Fahrenheit 451, Guy Montag is a “fireman” whose job it is to burn houses in which books are hidden. He’s been wrestling with the morality of his job, weighing the value of knowledge and free thought against the blissful ignorance of mindless entertainment. He knows a crisis of decision is coming, and it drives him to crazy behavior. He fakes an illness to avoid going to work. He reveals his own stash of hidden books to his brainless wife. He reads poetry to his wife’s equally-brainless friends. And he contacts the only ally he knows: a fearful old man that he’s only met once. But craziest of all, he decides to go back to work. Little does he know that, as he rides the fire engine to that night’s condemned house, he is riding to the Inmost Cave.

The Hobbit Is Approaching the Cave

By this stage, Bilbo and his companions have made it to the cave—the literal cave in which the dragon, Smaug, sleeps with the treasure that belongs to the dwarves. After they find the door, Bilbo volunteers to sneak a peek at the situation inside. Now, I think that Bilbo’s taking of the Arkenstone (Thorin’s most sought after gem) may fit in the stage called Reward or Seizing of the Sword, but that isn’t until two stages from now. Remember, these are common components of an adventure, not a formula to plug a plot into. The author can scramble or omit stages however he pleases, especially if he is J.R.R. Tolkien.

In The Hobbit, the inmost cave seems to be the literal cave full of treasure. However, the hardest part is not simply finding it (although that took more than half the book) but claiming it beyond dispute. Bilbo pulls a tricky maneuver and hands the Arkenstone over to the elves and men in hopes that this leverage will bring peace and avoid war. It doesn’t. Although Thorin and Company have claimed the cave, they have not yet faced the true Ordeal.

Today’s Question: Think of an Approach scene in an adventure story you know. What makes this an effective prelude for the Ordeal that follows?

Sources
Vogler, Christopher. The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, Second Edition. Studio City: Michael Wiese Productions, 1998.
Tolkien, J.R.R. The Hobbit. New York: Ballantine Books, 1937.

Stage Six: Tests, Allies, and Enemies

Who shot first: Han or Greedo?

Whether you have a strong opinion or couldn’t care less, that question probably still conjured up images of the cantina scene on Mos Eisley, didn’t it? This scene from Star Wars: A New Hope is a classic example of the “watering hole” scene in many adventure stories, and it’s a great introduction to Stage Six of the Hero’s Journey: Tests, Allies, and Enemies.

Remember, in Stage Five, the hero crossed the first threshold from the Ordinary World that he knew before to the Special World of the adventure. Christopher Vogler points out that “the audience’s first impressions of the Special World should strike a sharp contrast with the Ordinary World.” (135) Often (but not always), a “watering hole” scene is a great way for an author to showcase the shocking newness of the Special World. This could take place in a saloon, a cantina, or even a literal watering hole. Wherever people congregate in that world, that could be the perfect place to introduce the hero to some allies, enemies, and tests.

Allies, Enemies, and Tests

As the hero starts out in this new world of adventure, he’s going to need some allies. Allies can take several forms, Vogler explains, from new mentors and friends to a sidekick or even a whole team. The hero may pick up an unwelcome tagalong who becomes a helpful resource later on. (I reluctantly acknowledge Jar Jar Binks from Star Wars I.) The hero may be saved from a perilous situation by someone who becomes a friend. (I even more reluctantly suggest that if Star Wars I had been written from Jar Jar’s perspective, Qui-Gon Jinn would have been this kind of ally.) And some allies should be killed off almost immediately. (All right, I made that up, but it would have brought worldwide catharsis if Jar Jar had fallen over a cliff early on.)  Anyway, there are countless ways the hero can encounter allies for the first time, so get creative!

But the story wouldn’t be much of an adventure if the hero just went around making friends; in this new world, the hero is sure to make enemies, too. Since it’s early in the story, the enemies may not be a life-threatening force yet. They may send warnings to the hero, search out her weaknesses, and begin to test her limits. Their presence reminds us that much is at stake.

As you know, Stage Six includes not only allies and enemies but also tests. “The Tests at the beginning of Act Two are often difficult obstacles, but they don’t have the maximum life-and-death quality of later events.” (136) This is not the place for the story’s ultimate showdown between Simba and Scar or Aladdin and Jafaar. Instead, this is where Simba gets spooked in the elephant graveyard and Aladdin gets chased for stealing food in the market. These tests are real threats, but they’re not critical. The story is still warming up.

Examples from The Hobbit

Now, I can’t think of a specific “watering hole” scene in The Hobbit (but 10 points to Gryffindor if you can find one). However, the book is absolutely laden with tests, allies, and enemies. Rather than condensing these into one chapter or scene, Tolkien prefers to spin it out into many, many, many pages. But let’s face it: if he didn’t, he wouldn’t be Tolkien, and we wouldn’t love him half so much.

For example, Bilbo and the dwarves are tested by three mountain trolls, meet some elves as allies in Rivendell, and get abducted by goblins. Then Bilbo stumbles across an enemy whose threat grows greater than Bilbo could have anticipated: Gollum. He undergoes more tests in the form of riddles. The party reunites only to be cornered by another pack of enemies, the wolves. They are rescued by some allies, the eagles, and then meet another ally, Beorn…. So as not to rehash every chapter, I’ll stop here. But I think you get the picture. There are many tests, allies, and enemies at this stage of the journey.

During this stage of the adventure, much takes place to intensify the plot and move along the action. While he or she makes allies, faces enemies, and passes tests, the hero is drawing nearer to the next important phase of the adventure: The Approach to the Inmost Cave.

Today’s Question: Think of a story that you enjoy. As the action was warming up, how did the hero encounter allies, enemies, and tests?

Sources
Vogler, Christopher. The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, Second Edition. Studio City: Michael Wiese Productions, 1998.
Tolkien, J.R.R. The Hobbit. New York: Ballantine Books, 1937.

Awesome Children’s Books: A Brief Hiatus from the Hero’s Journey

Hello, dear friends! Today I want to talk about children’s books. But I’ll bet you’re wondering why on earth I would deprive you of the next installment of the Hero’s Journey. After all, you’ve probably been waiting for it all week with bated breath.

(As a side note, what’s with that phrase, anyway? “With bated breath”? What a weird thing to say. It’s so weird, in fact, that I just looked it up. According to my prestigious source, dictionary.com, “This expression literally means ‘holding one’s breath’ (bate means ‘restrain’).”

Oh. Well, that was prosaic. But now that I’m in the know, I plan to use the phrase at all the dinner parties I attend just so I can be smug about it.

“I say, Neville, what a simply smashing array of hors d’oeuvres. Ever since I received the invitation to your party, I’ve been waiting for it with bated breath.” Then I’ll have the opportunity to regale Neville with this information while loading up my tiny plate with cucumber and cream cheese sandwich wedges.

Children’s Books: Not Just for Kids

Now, as I was saying, while I’m sure you’ve all been holding your breath in anticipation for the next Hero’s Journey post, you’ll have to hold it a bit longer, I’m afraid. This week I want to talk about some of my favorite children’s books. But lest you begin to feel scornful about books that are written for children, let me clarify. I’m of the opinion that a well-written children’s book will be enjoyed by humans of all ages. C.S. Lewis agrees, saying, “I am almost inclined to set it up as a canon that a children’s story which is enjoyed only by children is a bad children’s story.”1

See? There you have it. And in this category of excellent children’s literature I’d like to nominate the Frog and Toad books by Arnold Lobel. These stories are short, simple, and magical, and I’ve never outgrown their charm. I’ve always been enchanted with the earth-toned pictures of these two friends in their woodsy, mushroomy world. I love the dynamic between grumpy, selfish, impulsive Toad and mature, patient, rational Frog. And there are situations and lines in these stories that I reference to this day.

Frog and Toad Make Me Hungry

For example, do you remember the hot summer day when Frog and Toad decide that what sounds best in the world is some “sweet, cold ice cream”? That description, along with the most excellent picture of Toad carrying these massive, cotton-candy shaped cones of chocolate ice cream, gets me every time. I want to run to the nearest ice cream shop and order a triple serving of my own sweet, cold ice cream. But I’d eat it there in the shop so that, unlike Toad, the ice cream wouldn’t melt all over my head and turn me into a sticky, drippy monster.2

Or what about the time that Toad bakes chocolate chip cookies and brings them all to Frog’s house? They said those were the best cookies they’d ever eaten, and I believe them. In fact,

“Frog and Toad ate many cookies one after another.
“‘You know, Toad,’ said Frog, with his mouth full, ‘I think we should stop eating. We will soon be sick.’
“‘You are right,’ said Toad. ‘Let us eat one last cookie, and then we will stop.’ Frog and Toad ate one last cookie. There were many cookies left in the bowl. ‘Frog,’ said Toad, ‘let us eat one very last cookie, and then we will stop.’ Frog and Toad ate one very last cookie.”3

As you can imagine, it was not their very last cookie. This story really resonates with me. But also, I absolutely adore the way Lobel draws these cookies. They are like tiny, chocolate chip wafers, just little discs of deliciousness. No wonder they couldn’t stop eating them! I would love to post a picture of it here, but it’s not public domain yet. Instead, why don’t you run to your nearest book store, buy a coffee, and settle in with some Frog and Toad books? Trust me, you will be delighted and enchanted. And you will most definitely be craving sweet, cold ice cream and chocolate chip cookies.

So what about you? What are some of your favorite children’s books? I’m always looking to discover some new classics. I’ll be waiting for your feedback with bated breath!

1From Lewis’s Essay, “On Three Ways of Writing for Children”
2From Arnold Lobel’s “Frog and Toad All Year”
3From Arnold Lobel’s “Frog and Toad Together”

Stage Five: Crossing the First Threshold

Life Lessons in Yosemite
Setting forth in blissful ignorance

A couple summers ago, my husband, sister, brother-in-law, and I went backpacking in Yosemite, California. I’d backpacked there for 4 days in previous years, so I thought I knew what to expect. I mean, how much harder is it to hike for 8 days instead of 4? Mathematically, the answer is 2 times harder. Realistically, the answer is 3,200 times harder. Math did not prepare me for this. Let me tell you, if I’d known how hard this adventure would be, it would have required a lot more convincing for me to step outside backpacker’s camp the first day. But as it was, I took my first step with blissful ignorance.

Taking 5 in the shade

The scenery was absolutely to die for, and there were times we nearly did just that. We fought off hordes of mosquitoes the size of pterodactyls, we ate freeze-dried beans for every meal, we scrabbled up mountain trails with a 90° incline, and we did all this while wearing packs that were four times our body weight. But the scenery was terrific.

Primordial ooze amongst hiking gear

The last hike was the most brutal. We had saved the most challenging hike for last, so we were already exhausted. Since there was no flowing water on that trail, we also had to carry an extra gallon of water all day. (Did you know that a gallon of water weighs 8 pounds? Did you know that 8 pounds feels like 100 when you’re climbing up a mountain?) I also thought we were low on food, so I didn’t eat much as we toiled upward. Needless to say, I was not feeling like a mighty mountain man by the end of that hike. In fact, I was the last one to reach the top, and I probably looked less like a hiker taking a final step and more like a puddle of primordial ooze seeping my way over the stone ledge.

But we’d made it. And it was worth it.

Sweet survival
Crossing the First Threshold

I’m sure you’re wondering why on earth I’m writing about the end of an adventure when this article is supposed to be about the beginning. Let me tell you why. In a sense, the last leg of the journey wasn’t difficult. It was exhausting, of course, but it wasn’t difficult. See, when we took our first step out of backpacker’s camp the first morning, we’d already determined to make it to the top of Cloud’s Rest and back again. We would get to the summit no matter how long it took us. And trust me, it took us a long time. But there was nothing complicated about it because we’d already made that decision when we crossed the first threshold.

In an adventure, as well as in life, the first step is often the hardest to take. Sure, you may be exhausted by the end, making progress just inches at a time. But in a sense, that is still easier than taking the first step, because the first step is the commitment. The next steps of the adventure begin to fall like dominoes, but only after you’ve managed to cross the first threshold.

“Crossing the First Threshold is an act of the will in which the hero commits wholeheartedly to the adventure,” says Christopher Vogler (127). That act of the will must be prompted by something, whether an external event, an internal one, or a combination of the two. Remember when we discussed the hero’s refusal of the call to adventure? Well, something needs to change his or her mind. Sometimes merely meeting with the mentor provides the motivation. Sometimes a circumstance changes or a problem intensifies. It’s even possible that the hero doesn’t choose to cross the threshold but is forced across anyway. In Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, Alice doesn’t exactly choose to fall down the rabbit hole; she slips in by accident. But whether by the design of the hero or of some higher power in the story, the hero must cross the first threshold in order to begin the adventure.

Example from The Hobbit

The same is true for Bilbo Baggins in The Hobbit. Upon hearing the dangerous proposition of the adventure, Bilbo has fainted. After he recovers in another room, he creeps back to where the dwarves are talking in the parlour and finds that they are talking about him. Gloin says, “’…As soon as I clapped eyes on the little fellow bobbing and puffing on the mat, I had my doubts. He looks more like a grocer than a burglar!’

“Then Mr Baggins turned the [door] handle and went in. The Took side had won. He suddenly felt he would go without bed and breakfast to be thought fierce. As for little fellow bobbing on the mat it almost made him really fierce. Many a time afterwards the Baggins part regretted what he did now….” (18). He signed himself right up for the adventure. By turning the handle on that parlour door, he crossed his first inner threshold.

Of course, he stalled out once more before actually setting off, but you can read all about that interaction in last week’s post about meeting with the Mentor. When all was said and done, Bilbo rushed from his cozy hobbit hole and into a grand and unknown adventure, crossing the first threshold with—well, if not with confidence, at least with gumption. Little does he know what’s in store for him next.

Today’s Question: In your own life, can you think of a time that you crossed an important threshold? What consequences did it have later on?

Sources
Vogler, Christopher. The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, Second Edition. Studio City: Michael Wiese Productions, 1998.
Tolkien, J.R.R. The Hobbit. New York: Ballantine Books, 1937.